the snake and my understanding ~ awarded by Jo
the snake and my understanding slipped, cool cold sharp somewhere, seeking body warm. fooled by the judgment toyed by desire, fixed by the empty to need to aspire. the rape and the permit, the face...
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~~Standing Ovation~~ I absolutely adore this poem Louis!!! Phenomenal Write!!! If I were to quote it would be the entire piece... your words were so true... this piece definitely hit home.
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Congratulations Louis...this really is a deserved award...you poetry speaks volumns and I lingered on every word..Your rhyme flows so smoothly it doesn't even feel like a rhyming piece....soft as...
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but... but... i never get awarded...thanks Jo...im not the sort thats easily seen...and i accept that...thanks muchly everso...
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well greenie...i am gobsmacked thanks...i usually get my rocks off boring people with my obscurity...its a bad habit I'm gunna fix...I'm working on being published... doing the deal it out...
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ahhhh wild bill...nice to see you...i commented on one of yours...a very accomplished piece it was...thanks to you...
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Louis....... I enjoyed this slithery rhymy thing from you this day, as usual I will have to return when time is more on my side... but return I will....................... Brendan.
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slithering things always slip under the guard...thanks mate...
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come pass the body down and let its leak of life go on the earth a better manger now the cusp once split by time and used of pain to find it once again and never have it leave. the augers rent the...
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Out-freaking-standing poetry, Sir Poet. I loved the way you sucked me in from the first phrase to the last... Don
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